- May 6, 2019
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I wouldn't touch that sentence at all. I think it's perfect just the way it is, even without knowing the backstory. I'll send you my edit of the conversation in Amaranth Groove. That will give you an idea as to whether or not I'm preserving your writing style.@Lady_JJ
Thank god I did all text not in events directly, but they loaded from text files, it will be much easier and faster to correct. I have some strenght left after work in unfriendly conditions, so I'm getting to work right away.
Edit: About that talk where Tallanar misspelled (on purpose)
Acretia is main antagonist, based on my ex-girlfriend, she left me with daughter so I did this writting on purpose. Yes, my ex is a witch.
Just small game of words.
Maybe more proper sentence would be... Hmmm...
Similar game of words was in Bruce Allmighty movie, at niagara waterfall: