STAR WARS The Untold Story

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Is a Role Play Game in genre RPG. It has Five Planet's to Explore,each planet has it own Story ,the Galaxy had it own story and the protagonist had her own story.
Each Planet has Secrets and Mini Games , the galaxy have many other Secret and non story Planet's for the Player to Explore..
 

Main Story:

The protagonist of game, Thala is Human from Alderaan who is trained to be a Je'daii Ranger (yes Je'daii not Jedi and that because the game is at the Force Wars Era at 25,793 BBY--Year's Before the Battle of Yavin--) , But somehow she had Contact with a great Menace...is the Galaxy Doomed or not?? that is for you to Deside.
 

Features:

 

  • About 20-60 hours of a gameplay.
  • Game contains enough of secrets.
  • Mini Games and Casino's.
  • One Main Story of the Era besides Protagonist Story and the Planet's Stories.
  • Difficult and interesting bosses.
 


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Minimum Requirements

 

  • Windows XP (or Above)
  •  1.40 GHz
  • 448 mb Ram
  • 400MB free space in Hard Disc








Download Full Game here -the link is because size limit is 4.88 mb :p
 
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Tried to download the game, was taken through an ad.fly link to a page which was instantly blocked by Malwarebytes for being extremely suspicious. I don't recommend anyone tries to download this project until it's uploaded to a safer location.
 
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Tried to download the game, was taken through an ad.fly link to a page which was instantly blocked by Malwarebytes for being extremely suspicious. I don't recommend anyone tries to download this project until it's uploaded to a safer location.
this is NOT true... Adlfy is a website that we can trust it just adds and ad in the download link and all you have to do is to wait a bit and click SKIP AD in anycase we will update the Download Links for those that are scared of waiting. so the second link will go in mediafire without the AD...


take a note that in Adlfy each click on SKIP AD is 0.005 cents of {euro/dollar} so yes with almost 100 downloads we are rich...
 

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way too many conflicting art styles, looks nothing like a star wars game... It just needs lots of help. Sorry but no offence this game kind of sucks
 a Real Star wars fan knows that in 25.792 BBY there was 0 {zero} Lightsabers,speed of light ships and many more buildings and stuff like in the movies... it was an era when the Jedaii was used swords,axes and some of them Vibroswords only the Rakata had Techonology and stuff..
thats why it was selected that era to create a game with the Rpg Vx Ace Machine...
 

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 a Real Star wars fan knows that in 25.792 BBY there was 0 {zero} Lightsabers,speed of light ships and many more buildings and stuff like in the movies... it was an era when the Jedaii was used swords,axes and some of them Vibroswords only the Rakata had Techonology and stuff..
thats why it was selected that era to create a game with the Rpg Vx Ace Machine...
what does that have to do with the many conflicting art styles.... Your game is terrible it uses too many different art styles and it doesn't look good and your maps are terrible, you should look at some maps to get u an idea of how to make yourself better....I am sorry but this game is just BAD and it doesn't even look like a star wars game, it looks like a bad game with no good style in it. you need to learn to pixel art or get someone who can pixel art to improve the art in your game.
 

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this is NOT true... Adlfy is a website that we can trust it just adds and ad in the download link and all you have to do is to wait a bit and click SKIP AD in anycase we will update the Download Links for those that are scared of waiting. so the second link will go in mediafire without the AD...


take a note that in Adlfy each click on SKIP AD is 0.005 cents of {euro/dollar} so yes with almost 100 downloads we are rich...
I never said ad.fly was dodgy (even though it is a shifty way of earning money) I said it took me to a place which was instantly blocked for being very suspicious. Three intrusions from that site were blocked by my system, I was warning others away so they don't have adware, malware, or other unwanted crap installing itself on their systems.
 
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this is NOT true... Adlfy is a website that we can trust it just adds and ad in the download link and all you have to do is to wait a bit and click SKIP AD in anycase we will update the Download Links for those that are scared of waiting. so the second link will go in mediafire without the AD...


take a note that in Adlfy each click on SKIP AD is 0.005 cents of {euro/dollar} so yes with almost 100 downloads we are rich...
But in case if you didn't know, adfly links are NOT allowed on this community. Hiding resources behind that service is against the rules.


> Read more about this


I have to agree with the others, that the game looks kinda bad for using many different styles at once, it all looks messy and out the place. I assume you were working alone and it's you first game, right? Then it's not that bad as for the first try - that being said, I saw games that looked exactly like this before.


The first improvement that you have to do in future projects is to not use resources with different styles, because it just looks kinda weird and really unprofessional.


Good luck! ^^
 

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Okay, played a bit. And I incinerated the game from my computer (or safe delete if you want to be more specific). Here are my notes while I was playing:


-I think there's no need to place a note that the game is under development, more content coming soon, yada yada. But why is it on the Completed Projects? Why not Project Developement? (If you are using the semantic versioning, of course.)


-Okay, the menu is terrible. I see what you wanted to do with the menu, but the current implementation is bad. It's too tedious for a menu, you'll need too much precision and the map is terrible.


-The encounters don't work on the training map and if they did, they would be annoying due to how close you are on activating them.


-Hello Windows Paint! Seriously, The models look horrible.


-The reflections don't work sometimes. (Am I missing something?)


-To the world map! And it looks like an empty sandbox.


-The battle music! Oh my lovely god, it's like my ears are on the grinder! Get better music!


-Spamus the Double Attackus. Because I am Duke Nukem, and I am OP when killing aliens! (In all seriousness, ballance your game!)


-Engrish. Engrish everywhere! Nobdy's safe.


-Oh! I think I broke the reflections. By walking on a bridge that went downwards...


-Apparently, the force is so strong in me, that the butterflies freeze mid air. Make sure to check the Walking Animation box when working on events like this.


-I found the forrest (which looks more like palm tree filled beach) but where's the entrance?


-Found it. Aaaaaaaaaand it's a dungeon? Eh?


-'Bury the dead', huh? That would be useful to build her character and skill set (both the Sith and Jedi have different skills, no?


-Found the guy, now to get out of there.


-Seriously, the battles are boring.


-Where do we save? Even Kingdom Hearts tells you where you save.


-Screw it, I'm done with this. *Fires up the incinerator*.


All in all, this game shouldn't have been released in this state. It's boring, and pretty much not worth of anybody's time. It's like you've gave no dime to your project, because you had the tools. Send it back to the drawing board, or cancel it if you don't want to work on this anymore.
 
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I feel like this is a troll game...

take a note that in Adlfy each click on SKIP AD is 0.005 cents of {euro/dollar} so yes with almost 100 downloads we are rich...


You would be making 50 cents, assuming you can ever reach 100.
 

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I think that story will stay untold...


Also when someone criticize your game, claiming that true fan of star wars knows that...(insert BS here) is a poor justification. So is calling on someone criticizing your mapping.


Star Wars isn't just a setting, its a feeling. I felt nothing.


the need to work more is strong with this one.
 

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I feel like perma-blocking the author of the OP.


Not only is it illegal to attempt to profit from a Star Wars title without permission from the people contracted to handle anything related to Star Wars, it is offensive to creative people everywhere. If you want things unrelated to Star Wars, then call it by another name. Or actually spend some time developing proper graphics to have a true fan based game, and DO NOT attempt to profit from it without affiliation or permission.


I was all like, oh no, someone made a game about star wars? How did they pull that off? And then I realized it looks like stolen materials and some rtp type stuff.
 

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Welp gave this a shot, quit by the second map. I already knew this was going to bad but not this bad.


First off, you probably could of made this look more like a star wars game with stock RTP sci-fi graphics. A lot of your added graphics just don't match at all, some things like for example that "casino sign" look like they were put together in paint in 30 seconds and slabbed on a tilesheet. Only thing that was close to enjoyable was the music which was all remixes of music from the movies or game probably slowed down or edited for 30 seconds tops in audacity to sound a tad different.


Secondly, you are still trying to monetize this game you have a adfly link and a non-adfly link. Though I have no clue who would choose to pick the adfly link you are still trying to profit off of copyright material. I don't think anyone could believe you made the music yourself so once again like all others above mentioned the adfly link should be removed for your own good.


Game is 1/10, every added custom property just made it worse this would of been a better game with all stock resources. Hit the drawing board again and stop trying to profit of the name and music of other people.
 
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why the facesets are so different  ? o_O use only one style...
 

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