Story Discussion

[Tyra Wadman]

Just wondering if there's anyone out there willing to listen to me ramble on about some story ideas I've had and have been slowly working over the years? Someone who doesn't mind that I'm breaking out of the stereotypical barriers, if not tweaking them a little... Someone who doesn't shudder at Dark-Fantasy settings or Controversial topics? It can be here or on skype. I'm just thinking that maybe by talking about it all to someone i can piece it together, or maybe even collaborate, if not just get a second opinion about it all. 

Key Notes:

-Suggestions and ideas are welcome, but when I write stories, there is no filler. Everything happens for a reason.

-A lot of these stories are intertwined somehow, such as the Final Decision Earth where portals open unpredictably and lead to where Sakana is. 

-Character Development! <3 

- A lot of these "Story names" or just placeholders for when I think of something better.

Here are some examples of my WIP Stories/Ideas

Sakana Namazu: You can see a picture of her on my website. An orphaned girl raised by two furry parents. Even though they raised her as one of their kind, Sakana never felt she belonged. Older and wiser, Sakana now uses her talents for terror by stealing and harvesting limbs and parts of her victims in order to give herself the perfect body. Fantasy, 'alternate universe' that is divided into different Eras. 

For this i have the general idea, but I have no other main characters, or any idea as to what animals her parents would be based on. I have nothing. My mind draws a blank when it comes to this Dexter-Esque lifestyle she has.

Kimoko: A Phantom Warrior that eventually is stalked by a young priestess. Desperate to put his soul to rest, she follows him on his quest. Normally it would have a not so pleasant ending, but I'm not sure what kinda of ending it should have. End the world? Or maybe he's revived and he's a villain? I dunno.

Final Decision: Semi Art Portfolio, semi personal, as it features my persona that basically slaps death in the face and now she's stuck 'undead' and adapting with society as it advances, and even resets. 

Origins - How it all began, how she lived her life and why she chose to cheat death. Dark Fantasy, Medieval setting, includes Romance, Action, Tragedy, Mystery and Deception.

Origins Part 2 - Takes place after she returns from the dead in order to find her son, Concludes how she has been deceived and spends the rest of her existence without the company of her loved ones.

Prince- A controversial romance between a young boy. Posing as a sword instructor, she accidentally woos the young prince. Affections become apparent, and for that she is banished from the kingdom, deemed a pedopgile, but the boy refuses to bury his feelings. She tried to keep in touch with him through code, marking dots above the words in books she sends, but he missed them. Eventually communication stops, and at the age of Twenty he is going to be wed to some princess. He goes to reminisce and pick up the books she sent where he finally realizes the code and sets out to find her. 

Mage Academy - Picture the emotional cliques of High School, now add magic. Magic is controversial to those without the power and thus, a grand wizard or sorts has pulled a plot of earth to the sky where he created a grand academy to teach the gifted to control and hone their magical abilities. This often results in the abduction of children, and they are not to be released until they have learned to master and respect the art. This is where my persona goes to enhance her magical abilities, though it mostly involves skipping classes and just reading books. It features a cast of "Extremists". Theres the one that's all about dark magic, there's one that doesn't even give a darn about magic and is super buff, but also a wimp, there's the brainiac, etc. 

Back to the Past (terrible pun is terrible - She eventually makes it to a year 2k setting where she meets the reincarnates of her beloved and tries a little too hard to befriend them

Transgender Romance - A "proper" christian girl and a goth/punk girl are best friends. Her goth friend turns out to be a lesbian and confesses her romantic feelings to the Christian girl. A mix of emotions leads to the christian girl being outraged, saying that she could only love a man, even if "She'd do anything to make her happy". Time passes and they don't speak to one another. Eventually the Christian girl hears of the Goth girls death. Christian girl spirals into depression and has taken up a similar style to her deceased friend. Then she's in school and one day the new boy in class is introduced. Her friend had gone through surgery, swapped genders and is now trying to seduce the Christian girl who is anti social and apparently a lesbian now. *Face palm* 

"Hair Phantom" - Because i don't remember the proper name for them. The Japanese(?) ghost that has super long hair that tries to kill everything. She needs souls in order to live, and her mysterious, ghostly figure seduces a young boy that would "Do anything" to help her, no matter how bloody. He brings the naive souls to her, where she feeds. Eventually he doesn't seem to like doing this anymore, and is beginning to have second thoughts. He even starts to take interest in another girl, where she of course finds out, and makes an effort to kill her. 

There are plenty more but I'll just leave it at this for now. Sorry for Vagueness.

 

[Tyra Wadman]

Additional Note: The only problem I see with actually discussing this, is the races. I'm currently working on writing their descriptions. There are elves and dwarves, humans and so on. 

Example - 

Demon:[SIZE=12pt] [/SIZE][SIZE=12pt]For their ancestors defiance, the demons have been punished by the gods. Sealed beneath the earth where they will live out their infinite lives in eternal darkness. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Also known as shape shifters with an inherent, voracious nature. In order to shift or alter their physical form the demon must first consume and digest the [/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]necessary ‘ingredients’ where they are then stored inside their hollow souls. For that reason, it isn’t uncommon for a demon to breed and immediately [/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]cannibalize a [/SIZE][SIZE=12pt]newborn. Demons can only breed with another demon.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]A demon’s original form can vary in appearance, much like humans, but they are always pale with white hair and red eyes. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Through defiance the demons are finding more and more ways to live among the surface, one commonly known as Posession, or Bonding, if the host is willing. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Bonding/Posession occurs when a demon enters the host through an open wound or sore and merges with the bloodstream. This means that Demons can merge with more than just a human. Upon merging, the host is now capable of altering their form (with the right ingredients) and rate of healing could be [/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]instantaneous. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Long term Merging can cause the host to develop white hair, pale skin and red eyes. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]When the host dies the demon will also die unless they find another host.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Demons can live forever, but are not invincible. Because they can alter their shape to the smallest of forms, it is only safe to assume the Demon is dead once it has been exposed to light or  is ‘blown to smithereens’, [/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Elves : Still working on it, but they're not limited to petite/athletic physiques. They inherit the ability to manipulate nature, and can live off of the energy of plants by simply touching and absorbing. Because of their connection through nature an elf can sense the presence of another elf, some can detect at greater distances than others. This also makes it easier for them to read the emotions of others. They also have their own traditions and practices, such as licking up their loved ones tear(s), a symbol for 'sharing the pain'. Elves can link souls with their elven lover, meaning that if one were to die, their partner would follow suit. [/SIZE]

I can't really figure out how to word/arrange the other race descriptions right now.

Screw this copy and paste thing...

 

[Tyra Wadman]

Nobody? x( 

 

[Gothic Lolita]

Well, I'm not really good at story writing. 
I only can say that Transgender Romance [SIZE=14.4444446563721px]was the most interresting for me.
Also liked the Prince story so far. May because I really like the romantic and tragic stuff.
The next thing is, that these two are pretty outstanding. Even the story of the Prince kinda remembers me of Saya No Uta. (\s/)

Suggestions for Sakana Namazu story, there would be a fantasy setting good with really various races.
Like Catgirls, foxy's, wolfman, centaurs and such things. To bring them all together could be tough, because of different styles.
You probably need to think of a unique personal style. /)[/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.4444446563721px]If I get something wrong, please don't be mad at me. But sometimes I'm having hard time to understand english. [/SIZE]

 

[Tyra Wadman]

Well, I'm not really good at story writing. 

I only can say that Transgender Romance [SIZE=14.4444446563721px]was the most interresting for me.[/SIZE]

Also liked the Prince story so far. May because I really like the romantic and tragic stuff.

The next thing is, that these two are pretty outstanding. Even the story of the Prince kinda remembers me of Saya No Uta. (\s/)

Suggestions for Sakana Namazu story, there would be a fantasy setting good with really various races.

Like Catgirls, foxy's, wolfman, centaurs and such things. To bring them all together could be tough, because of different styles.

You probably need to think of a unique personal style. /)

[SIZE=14.4444446563721px]If I get something wrong, please don't be mad at me. But sometimes I'm having hard time to understand english. [/SIZE]

I agree, I kinda want to work on making the Transgender Romance story, but like my Kimoko story, I have the beginning and the end planned out but nothing in between leading up to it. 

Sakana Namazu story, yes, it would include a lot of the foxy's and wolfman. I never thought about centaurs though, that could be a cool idea!

No worries about the english. It's fine. I'm mostly just posting this to get feedback and maybe if I ramble about my ideas, maybe I can figure how to organize them somehow. XD 

 

[Gothic Lolita]

I planned one time too a fantasy setting RPG, but a virus killed that project. :/
There I had plenty of OC races.
Mostly based on well known one, but edited, so they will be unique.
There could be regional races, like:

In the cold north: Icewulf, Snowfox, snow hawk
As foes there: Icegolem, Iceelementar and those

In the south: Snake, vultures, lizards, lions

Just a thought so. But foes would be kinda hard maybe. Because romance and enemies are hard to combine.
Even so that could lead to protective situations.
For Sakana Namazu it would fit for sure, because she kinda collects body parts to gain the most beauty. (\s/)

 

[Sharm]

Tyra Wadman, please avoid double posting, as it is against the forum rules. You can review our forum rules here. Thank you.

 

[Tyra Wadman]

Tyra Wadman, please avoid double posting, as it is against the forum rules. You can review our forum rules here. Thank you.

when did this happen?

Edit: Never mind, thought you meant in the literal sense of posting the same content twice. Not one under the other. In that case this thread should be closed, assuming you or any other mod gets this message. 

 

[Sharm]

Okay, I'll do that. Next time if you need a mod to alter something or close something just report the post and explain why.