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Hello RPGM community! I just started using RPGM VX Ace, and after fooling around with it, I wanted to bring an old story of mine out of the ashes.

Title of the game: The Forgotten Gates to Purgatory

Originally, it was Forgotten Purgatory, but that was 3 years ago, and this is my story :p below is a link to the first three chapters and random info bits on my old deviantArt:

http://mmorpgirl.deviantart.com/gallery/35036899/Forgotten-Purgatory

TL;DR: Basically a fantasy/adventure story about a young girl who wanted to be a skillful fire mage (but because she's human, she has a harder time mastering the class). Based on my last sentence, you can tell there's going to be classes (mage, warrior, etc) and races (humans, elves) --- DON'T WORRY, for the most part, they will have different names and titles. (And it's still changing).

Another element to the game is the dating sim. I was, and still am, inspired by the game Persona by Atlus (specifically 3 Portable) because of the choice of playing a girl and being able to date guys, instead of the typical guy dating unlimited number of girls. 

Lastly, I was wondering if there's a possibility of changing the combat system to tactical-turn based, if possible. I don't mind the normal turn based, but I would love it if I could change it.

And that's all for my game. At the moment, I'm refining my art style, and slightly collaborating with a friend of mine, whilst playing around VX Ace by myself. I understand my game won't be perfect/finished in less than a month/completed at all. I want to commit in this game 100% and with seriousness, and I hope the community can help me in a positive way :) Thanks!
 
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Sorry, it's editted. Thanks for letting me know.
 

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Tactics would be cool. I'm also curious, hope you get a good answer.
 

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Tactics would be cool. I'm also curious, hope you get a good answer.
Thank you! I would assume it would be simple, or at least achievable. I don't really have a wide knowledge of any language (yet), so making one myself wouldn't really help at all ^^;
 

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