Territory Defender

[jonathan4210]

Download: http://www.mediafire.com/?8c2517ibd0by3im

Story:

Demons have been summoned throughout the land, and they kill anyone they see on sight. Their numbers are growing, and the land is quickly becoming infested. King Harrison wants to defend his castle, along with as much additional land as possible. He decides to hire a leader to lead his soldiers into battle. Who will be the great Territory Defender?

Gameplay Features:

- Storyline is funny, emotional, and epic!

- Different types of levels to explore in one big world map!

- 3 classes to choose from (see Heroes section for details)!

- Upgrade your hero with different weapons, armor, and skills as you progress in your adventure!

Heroes:

Arthur: Arthur is a warrior that favors a giant axe. He has powerful close range attacks, and can also endure heavy damage.

Kain: Kain is a rogue that favors a dagger and a gun. He has deadly fast attacks and evasive skills.

Moris: Moris is a mage that favors elemental magic. Although he is fragile, he uses powerful spells at a long range, and also has supportive spells.

Screenshots:

Credits:

Game Developer (storyline, mapping, gameplay balancing, etc.):
jonathan4210

Music:
Bungie
ChAIR Entertainment
Enterbrain
Greatest Battle Music Of All Times
Immediate Music
Two Steps from Hell

Graphics:
Enterbrain
Grafikal
Holy Mombasa
JFloyd
Jon4270
jonathan4210
LandOfShadows
Mastermoo420
Mazeran
SirJackRex
Sithjester

Scripts:
Blizzard
Enterbrain
Moghunter
Xiderwong

RMXP Program:
Enterbrain

 

[shayoko]

As awesome as this looks(not sarcastic)

can we get more

-female leads

-Evil leads

-demon leads

-monster girl leads

-plots that focus on destroying all thats good

-being a murderer/general bad guy

-heck have humans as the evil invaders and non humans be the main characters

something that is the opposite of saving the world from evil???

just like in sc people too obsessed about making maps with the  terrans as the good guys

killing zerg

sugar only does so much for something thats been long stale :/

 

[moneymenace]

Alright, I just did the Lord Cyrus fight, and I must say that I'm incredibly impressed with what's happening so far.

The Battle System

I am a personal fan of the battle system you are using. It doesn't stop the flow of the gameplay, and getting damaged is entirely the responsibility of the player. At first, I thought the game was a bit too easy, but then the first boss battle in Moonshine Cave was a nice wake-up call and it was a pretty nice fight.

However, when it came to the Lord Cyrus, I thought it was a bit too long for my tastes. Especially since I died the first time :/ when he was down to 1000 health and I just wasn't paying attention to my health and it just got away from me. It was a bummer and it was just as long the second time, but it didn't take away from the experience. I was fine with it.

The Story

Okay, I'm a softie for bits of romance, I will admit. I look forward to seeing more of it, and I'll let you know what I think as I go. Some parts seem a bit cheesy and cliched, but it's used fairly rationally. I do like the Princess, Moris, and the Dark Lords as characters. They seem decently balanced and well-rounded. I even liked the scene with the King's annoying guard when he was talking about his crappy job as a teacher. Just made the characters seem a little human.

All of the aesthetics

- The music and sound effects are used wonderfully, even if you had to resort to default music. I personally think the music used in the first 'Survive!' battle is a little overused and slightly out-of-place (the one clearly from Two Steps from Hell), but that's from a composer's perspective. I like original stuff, of course.

- The mapping is nice and simple, as it should be.

- The attacks in battle are cool and flashy, and it makes gameplay nice and engaging.

Everything else

- Here's the thing: your OP does not sell your game at all. You have something pretty good here, and your post just seems so lazily done. In most cases, I would just take a look at it, shrug, and move on my way. You managed to make your game pop, I'm sure you can do a thing or two on your game topic.

- Maybe add in a few more monsters into each area. Either that, or don't introduce every single monster you're going to encounter in the first room. I know I've only played early in the game, but it's so easy to learn each of the monsters' skills and powers in the first room, and then have them mastered by the second room.

- Make Lord Cyrus' fight a bit shorter. I know he's a lord and everything, but 10000 HP and hits that round out to be roughly 40 damage each, it makes for a long fight. Especially since Cyrus' pattern doesn't change at all (which is sad, because I died to him once, but still)

I'm going to gladly continue on, and I'll let you know again what I think when I finish the whole thing.

EDIT:
Okay, apparently if you upgrade your spells, it makes you more powerful and makes the Cyrus a hundred times easier. :/ Well, that was me being dumb, the fight is perfectly reasonable.
Also, I got an error in two spots. Script 'XAS - Battler 2' line 1408: NoMethodError occurred. undefined method '-' for nil:NilClass: when I entered the cave with the big trolls and stuff. Essentially, I took the cart towards the inside, went to the left a bit, and then it took me out. And it happened in the middle of the 2nd horde fight.

 

[jonathan4210]

Alright, I just did the Lord Cyrus fight, and I must say that I'm incredibly impressed with what's happening so far.

The Battle System

I am a personal fan of the battle system you are using. It doesn't stop the flow of the gameplay, and getting damaged is entirely the responsibility of the player. At first, I thought the game was a bit too easy, but then the first boss battle in Moonshine Cave was a nice wake-up call and it was a pretty nice fight.

However, when it came to the Lord Cyrus, I thought it was a bit too long for my tastes. Especially since I died the first time :/ when he was down to 1000 health and I just wasn't paying attention to my health and it just got away from me. It was a bummer and it was just as long the second time, but it didn't take away from the experience. I was fine with it.

The Story

Okay, I'm a softie for bits of romance, I will admit. I look forward to seeing more of it, and I'll let you know what I think as I go. Some parts seem a bit cheesy and cliched, but it's used fairly rationally. I do like the Princess, Moris, and the Dark Lords as characters. They seem decently balanced and well-rounded. I even liked the scene with the King's annoying guard when he was talking about his crappy job as a teacher. Just made the characters seem a little human.

All of the aesthetics

- The music and sound effects are used wonderfully, even if you had to resort to default music. I personally think the music used in the first 'Survive!' battle is a little overused and slightly out-of-place (the one clearly from Two Steps from Hell), but that's from a composer's perspective. I like original stuff, of course.

- The mapping is nice and simple, as it should be.

- The attacks in battle are cool and flashy, and it makes gameplay nice and engaging.

Everything else

- Here's the thing: your OP does not sell your game at all. You have something pretty good here, and your post just seems so lazily done. In most cases, I would just take a look at it, shrug, and move on my way. You managed to make your game pop, I'm sure you can do a thing or two on your game topic.

- Maybe add in a few more monsters into each area. Either that, or don't introduce every single monster you're going to encounter in the first room. I know I've only played early in the game, but it's so easy to learn each of the monsters' skills and powers in the first room, and then have them mastered by the second room.

- Make Lord Cyrus' fight a bit shorter. I know he's a lord and everything, but 10000 HP and hits that round out to be roughly 40 damage each, it makes for a long fight. Especially since Cyrus' pattern doesn't change at all (which is sad, because I died to him once, but still)

I'm going to gladly continue on, and I'll let you know again what I think when I finish the whole thing.

EDIT:

Okay, apparently if you upgrade your spells, it makes you more powerful and makes the Cyrus a hundred times easier. :/ Well, that was me being dumb, the fight is perfectly reasonable.

Also, I got an error in two spots. Script 'XAS - Battler 2' line 1408: NoMethodError occurred. undefined method '-' for nil:NilClass: when I entered the cave with the big trolls and stuff. Essentially, I took the cart towards the inside, went to the left a bit, and then it took me out. And it happened in the middle of the 2nd horde fight.

First off, thank you so much for your detailed opinion, I really appreciate it . I'm glad you are enjoying the battle system and music. Your other suggestions, along with Shayoko's suggestions are more suited if I were to use those suggestions for a sequel, rather than updating this game. So thanks for that.

Also about the error you're getting, I'm sorry, but I haven't found a fix for it (I don't even know the cause). However, it seems to be very rare and doesn't happen at the same spot all the time. I did thorough playthroughs with all 3 classes for testing, and only encountered that error message once (happened with Moris), so I guess you're just unlucky? I also had friends who beaten the game with Moris and never got the error message.

 

[shayoko]

Random thoughts-good/bad/notes/glitches

Spoiler

-King anderson-You remember my daugher sophia,do you? ,this sounds awkward should say
Do you remember my daughter sophia?
-battle system is nice,i prefer this highly over a combo system

-Ive been working for you for 20 years!why cant i be the leader?>reply=LMAO

-Would of really liked to be able to save right b4 picking a leader
^really cool you actually get a choice! unexpected!

-king harrison needs a foot shoved up his back end,asking questions that arent his business...

-o..m..g the writing is just horrid sometimes 1.needing to repeat herself 2.him asking how someone is in love...

-whats with the random 5 year break? the war would be over!

-awkward dialog> "Villagers from are land get kidnapped to this place"

-just get a dam good feeling with guards that dont look useless : D wish i was the king/queen

-if she was supposed to go to the desert,does not make sense that you have to go thru all that to get in.
she s not a fighter

-sophia is a really REALLY stupid girl...respecting her dads wishes when he does nto care about hers...i cant even pity her...

-i....i really hate her..please kill her off...

-Moris ling thru his teeth,her father didn't die protecting her.he died because he was a rear end in a top hat!

-moris is a idiot too but really sophia....really...you would let a innocent suffer to protect a childish secret? dam this *****!

-Dam these people and there random 5 year breaks during a war!

- henry is a pedo!his new queen looks like his daughter should and the daughter looks like a queen!
i

-im really going to hate this game in the end if  Sophia dont die...at least the story part of it...

-hmm why...why was romney THAT far away???he has a job near the castle area.does not make any sense!
^adding to that the reason your here in the 1st place is because it was to dangerous for him to go alone yet...

-lvl 80 is max unexpected.

-well thats not a surprise he was in the final room,none of this made any sense...im glad he was would be stupid otherwise.

-dialog should change a little more with people in the castle,like you get this new guards im surprised no one commented on it.

-i already hated the plot,i didn't think it could get anyworse.but getting trained by a hero from the future? does not make sense if your time lost in the 1st place.

-dam...its aiming for a cheesy ending i can respect the other one because he put his life on the line after what he did but sophia...damit she needs to die...

-eww random love...guh this sucks like the average American movie!

-Finally a good scene! the dark lord....feel so bad for him....sophia deserves death and im doubting she is going to get it...

-Finished

 Overall

Spoiler

Plot

was cliche,i hated it it.characters that deserved to die didn't...humans who are just as bad if not worse then other races don't realize they are evil...

game would of been infinantly better plot wise if you played the other side and they won.

Gameplay

While i enjoyed the action packed battle system,many would most likely find it painful and repetitive(which is one possible problem from having multiple heros like this)

i was hoping that not just power of spells but the visual effect would increase as well.

the enemies as well were just there realistically

tho i did not get particularly board

in terms of fighting the only difference is there stats and appearance mostly(cant be helped but gotta be honest)

i liked the replayable lvls and the store set up and equipment.

Characters

hmm sadly by the end of it the only characters i liked were the 3 Dark lords especially there leader and the Angels :3

everyone else is a terrible person,stupid,worthless and or boring

Final thoughts

Spoiler

due to length and how much i hated the plot and characters sadly i wont be doing a playthru for this

despite that as a whole,i did manage to enjoy the game due to the entertaining battle system.

you may want to grind a bit you can probably beat the game w/o max gear but its nice to have(expensive but possible to obtain late game)

id...lightly recommend this to others.

i think the average person still finds what i cant stand entertaining so they may enjoy this even more then i did

I think...that covers it i also enjoyed the "secret" :3

Have a good day! : D

Edit

Temporary special! Gamesaves

Spoiler

http://www.4shared.com/rar/P8DOQYBGce/Territory_Defender_Game_saves.html

 

[jonathan4210]

Random thoughts-good/bad/notes/glitches

Spoiler

-King anderson-You remember my daugher sophia,do you? ,this sounds awkward should say

Do you remember my daughter sophia?

-battle system is nice,i prefer this highly over a combo system

-Ive been working for you for 20 years!why cant i be the leader?>reply=LMAO

-Would of really liked to be able to save right b4 picking a leader

^really cool you actually get a choice! unexpected!

-king harrison needs a foot shoved up his back end,asking questions that arent his business...

-o..m..g the writing is just horrid sometimes 1.needing to repeat herself 2.him asking how someone is in love...

-whats with the random 5 year break? the war would be over!

-awkward dialog> "Villagers from are land get kidnapped to this place"

-just get a dam good feeling with guards that dont look useless : D wish i was the king/queen

-if she was supposed to go to the desert,does not make sense that you have to go thru all that to get in.

she s not a fighter

-sophia is a really REALLY stupid girl...respecting her dads wishes when he does nto care about hers...i cant even pity her...

-i....i really hate her..please kill her off...

-Moris ling thru his teeth,her father didn't die protecting her.he died because he was a rear end in a top hat!

-moris is a idiot too but really sophia....really...you would let a innocent suffer to protect a childish secret? dam this *****!

-Dam these people and there random 5 year breaks during a war!

- henry is a pedo!his new queen looks like his daughter should and the daughter looks like a queen!

i

-im really going to hate this game in the end if  Sophia dont die...at least the story part of it...

-hmm why...why was romney THAT far away???he has a job near the castle area.does not make any sense!

^adding to that the reason your here in the 1st place is because it was to dangerous for him to go alone yet...

-lvl 80 is max unexpected.

-well thats not a surprise he was in the final room,none of this made any sense...im glad he was would be stupid otherwise.

-dialog should change a little more with people in the castle,like you get this new guards im surprised no one commented on it.

-i already hated the plot,i didn't think it could get anyworse.but getting trained by a hero from the future? does not make sense if your time lost in the 1st place.

-dam...its aiming for a cheesy ending i can respect the other one because he put his life on the line after what he did but sophia...damit she needs to die...

-eww random love...guh this sucks like the average American movie!

-Finally a good scene! the dark lord....feel so bad for him....sophia deserves death and im doubting she is going to get it...

-Finished

Spoiler

Overall

Plot

was cliche,i hated it it.characters that deserved to die didn't...humans who are just as bad if not worse then other races don't realize they are evil...

game would of been infinantly better plot wise if you played the other side and they won.

Gameplay

While i enjoyed the action packed battle system,many would most likely find it painful and repetitive(which is one possible problem from having multiple heros like this)

i was hoping that not just power of spells but the visual effect would increase as well.

the enemies as well were just there realistically

tho i did not get particularly board

in terms of fighting the only difference is there stats and appearance mostly(cant be helped but gotta be honest)

i liked the replayable lvls and the store set up and equipment.

Characters

hmm sadly by the end of it the only characters i liked were the 3 Dark lords especially there leader and the Angels :3

everyone else is a terrible person,stupid,worthless and or boring

Final thoughts

Spoiler

due to length and how much i hated the plot and characters sadly i wont be doing a playthru for this

despite that as a whole,i did manage to enjoy the game due to the entertaining battle system.

you may want to grind a bit you can probably beat the game w/o max gear but its nice to have(expensive but possible to obtain late game)

id...lightly recommend this to others.

i think the average person still finds what i cant stand entertaining so they may enjoy this even more then i did

I think...that covers it i also enjoyed the "secret" :3

Have a good day! : D

Thanks for your thoughts on the game. Reading them made me laugh , honestly. Some things you mentioned are true.