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Heya there. I would love to get your opinion and some feedback on the demo of my most recent project, Incitement 3. It's only 1 hour long so far, but it should give a good idea of what the game is like. Thanks in advance and hope you enjoy it. :)
 

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Heya there. I would love to get your opinion and some feedback on the demo of my most recent project, Incitement 3. It's only 1 hour long so far, but it should give a good idea of what the game is like. Thanks in advance and hope you enjoy it. :)
http://gamejolt.com/games/rpg/immortal-sins/35569/

Could you please play test this?

Note that this isn't the full version (it's a demo).

Thank you.
Got caught up on a larger project. Will have the games tested and reviewed. how would yall two like the reviews? Here or in a private message.
 

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I don't mind. Whichever way is most convenient for you. :)
 

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Heya there. I would love to get your opinion and some feedback on the demo of my most recent project, Incitement 3. It's only 1 hour long so far, but it should give a good idea of what the game is like. Thanks in advance and hope you enjoy it. :)
Review time-

Personal thoughts on Incitement 3

Fun,interactive little demo which shows hands down the full game will be one to enjoy. The little things such as title screen and menus ,show that the maker cared enough to make them different so the player can enjoy them more then a generic set up all to common in rpg maker titles. The sound is also wonderful and set the scene pretty well. The sci-fi/steampunk theme looks wonderful as well.

Review- 

I am going to start with a small quote from the creator. "The story is being designed so that it’s easily understandable by those who have not played the first 2 games" While this is only a demo,most gamers when offered a demo will try that out before buying the game. As i have not personally played the first 2 game in this series i find this statement misleading when it comes to the demo. Mainly straight from the beginning you are tossed into chaos ,first viewing the bad guys? side then the good guys?. What could help here is a little intro video setting the scene with a little back story. Tell of the things that lead to what is starting out in this version ,so the player has some idea as to where they are when they start.

What we have so far didn't seem to establish any real sense of hating the bad guys or loving the good guys. 

The small details are well thought out and show the level of the creator and the experience they have gained since making the first 2 games in this series. The hacking mini game is a nice little touch as well. 

The graphics are perfect for this type of game and are rather well-done. The way the game was mapped made me thing i was in a steampunk futuristic place,thus making robots and machines perfect enemies.

Now the skill system is an interesting thing using both AP(ammo points) as well as various types of bullets for certain moves. Sadly, this is one spot i see lacking based most likely off assumptions the player will have played pervious versions. That being an explanation on how it works. What i mean here is the special bullets , they need to have say a small tutorial to go with them in the first or second battle. All it would need to say is something like "this move uses special ammo which can be found via battling,chests,or bought at a shop. With out this ammo you will not be able to use this move" then it would be a tad more specific to each and would name the ammo such as cryo bullets or supporitve ammo.

Not sure what more there is to say- the game offers many chances to get items from shops as well as worldly healing stations,which everyone loves. Perhaps the game could use some form of illustration for the ship the players travel from place to place on a sort of a screen transfer.

Rating 7.5/10 

Wonderful and beautiful game well worth playing

Lacks the needed story recap to set the stage for the game for players who have not played prior versions in the series,thus leaving the player potentially confused as to why the things  that are happening are even there.

could use a little tutorial on the special skill section of combat as well as on the add-ons for gear. 
 

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Thanks for the review Odinnightowl. Good points there. I think I really do need to add a small tutorial on special ammo. It's actually something that's completely newly added in this installment, so even players of first 2 games might get confused with it.

With the story recap, I admit it's always tough with sequels. In the 2nd game I had a much bigger recap, which I felt was too much of an info dump, so I tried to keep the one in this game much shorter. I'll see what I can do though. Maybe I just need to add a few more key pieces of info somewhere.

Thanks again for the feedback.
 

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hi  OdinNightOwl.

Should you find the time, here is a little demo from the game I am making.

I don't have a title for it yet, so It's called Project 1 at this stage of the game.

Here is a link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/6rppksprkxcvh9x/Project%201.rar?dl=0

and I would like your review in a PM please.

Thanks in advance,

/wallie

Edit: Link updated!
 
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Same here.
Sent you a private message to try and clear something up

I would like to add my have to your list of I could.

Direct demo link - https://www.dropbox.com/s/el1a2rpq72qk4i2/Flight%20of%20the%20Eagle%200.2.1.exe?dl=0

Or click my signature for a full overview of the game. Should be around 30-40 minutes for the demo.

edit - updated with new link, dont play the old one if you have already dl'd it.
Will be started on yours shortly please let me know if you would like the review here,on your overview page or in a private message, or even a combo of the choices.

Thanks for the review Odinnightowl. Good points there. I think I really do need to add a small tutorial on special ammo. It's actually something that's completely newly added in this installment, so even players of first 2 games might get confused with it.

With the story recap, I admit it's always tough with sequels. In the 2nd game I had a much bigger recap, which I felt was too much of an info dump, so I tried to keep the one in this game much shorter. I'll see what I can do though. Maybe I just need to add a few more key pieces of info somewhere.

Thanks again for the feedback.
You are welcome. I do this because i love video gaming and strive to make the world of gaming a better place one game at a time.

hi  OdinNightOwl.

Should you find the time, here is a little demo from the game I am making.

I don't have a title for it yet, so It's called Project 1 at this stage of the game.

Here is a link: http://www.dropbox.com/s/fz6w6mns7vcjuf7/Project1%205-3-2015.exe?dl=0

and I would like your review in a PM please.

Thanks in advance,

/wallie
You are added to the list and i will try to get to your game in the next few days.
 

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Dear Odin, I plan to become a developer and I have a budget for my games.. good enough for a small mini studio

Hence I would like to hire you as a tester and send you the different versions of the games and

modify them according to your suggestions if you would be interested in that let me know.

I can pay you for x times I modify (you give me feedback on) the game according to your suggestions

I can pay you if you have a donate button with paypal... If not you can set one up quite quickly..

This is my first time making a game.

This is my first 20 min demo: https://www.dropbox.com/s/vqxfd9um4di36i9/ABE%20HEROES%20BETA.exe?dl=0

I have fixed some bugs after this version but you could try this one out and see how it goes... provide some suggestions and input?

up to you

Would you be interested in this??
 

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Dear Odin, I plan to become a developer and I have a budget for my games.. good enough for a small mini studio

Hence I would like to hire you as a tester and send you the different versions of the games and

modify them according to your suggestions if you would be interested in that let me know.

I can pay you for x times I modify (you give me feedback on) the game according to your suggestions

I can pay you if you have a donate button with paypal... If not you can set one up quite quickly..

This is my first time making a game.

This is my first 20 min demo: https://www.dropbox.com/s/vqxfd9um4di36i9/ABE%20HEROES%20BETA.exe?dl=0

I have fixed some bugs after this version but you could try this one out and see how it goes... provide some suggestions and input?

up to you

Would you be interested in this??
Yes i will be interested in assisting you in this and will be giving your demo a run thru. As for the button i have it as a link in my signature as the code for the actual button would not list correctly in the signature area. How ever the link works perfectly as the same option just is not a button.
 

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Hey OdinNightOwl,

Thank you for reviewing my demo.

It helped me alot on improving it even more.

If I can do something for you, let me know.

/wallie
 

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If you got some time, could you please test mine (signature) :3 ? I'd really appreciate it. I'm pretty sure there are a few bugs that escaped my eye >=( !
 
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Put the review for mine on my games page if you can. Feel free to repost it here as well if you want.
 

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