The Edge Of Hero's End (DEMO)

[3GameMakers]

Hello!
This Is My Game For The Indie Game Maker 2014 Contest! This Is Also My First Game!

 

 
You Are Just An Average Man Living Your Life On A Peaceful Island.Of Course...That Won't Last For Long. You Hear Talk About A Ship's Arrival And Decide To Go To The Ship. The Pirate Takes You To An Island Where You Have To Be The Hero! You Take Your Sister Gem And You On A New Journey As You Battle Demons And Befriend Gods!



John

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A True Warrior. He Is Couragous And Loves Swords. He Doesn't Know He Will Be A Hero Though.

Gem

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John's Sister, An Expert In Magic She Helps John On His Adventure!

Noah

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A Brave Archer! He Became Your Friend Early. You Don't Know Much About Him.

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Cool Town!

Epic Battles!



Shops!

Mild Language

Mild Use Of Alcohol



Save Engine, Core, Battle System, And Options: Yanfly

Title Screen: NerdiGaming

Menu Screen: XaiL


 
This Game Will Have A Full Game Download On June 29,2014. The Day Before Games Are Do On The Contest.

This Is Just A Demo. The Game Is Still Being Worked On And Will Be Finished On June 29,2014. Please Leave Feedback On Some Changes You Think Should Be Made Or Some Suggestions.



The Edge Of Hero's End

 

[3GameMakers]

Tis Was A Bump!

 

[Clord]

I played the demo of your game until I reached to another island.


Now, I assume that mapping is heavily work in progress right?


The game has promise as your writing is actually quite good.

 

[3GameMakers]

@Clord,

The Demo Ends After You Go Inside A Castle That Is On That Island, So Yes It Is Still A Heavy Work In Progress Since The Game I'm Making Is Supposed To Hit The 1 Hour Limit And That Demo Gives You 5-7 Minutes Of It Depending On How Fast Or Slow You Go Through.

*EDIT*

I Missed Something. Yes The Mapping Still Needs Work

 

[3GameMakers]

*GAME ADD*

Small Update!

I Added A New Script For The Menu.

Credit Under Credit

 

[3GameMakers]

And then the 3GameMakers said, "Let there be another bump!"

 

[3GameMakers]

*GAME UPDATE*

My first update! I'm working on the castle interior so that we can get closer to the first boss!

here is a screenshot!

 

[3GameMakers]

Today is a new say for a bump! Going to finish the interior of the castle today!

 

[Indrah]

Here's my very quick and sketchy take on the game (link for info on why it's so short and all that jazz)




This is very obviously a very early attempt with a lot, LOT, of very newbies mistakes. Can’t judge it in the same way I can’t be arsed to play it, there is nothing that stands out to me as good. Some things that need work on the whole:


-GET RID OF CAPITALIZING EVERY WORD. No one will take you seriously doing that.


-The text.


-Mapping (oh god the mapping)


-You have to introduce your characters in some way.


-Player guidance and plot (there has to be SOME).


-Encounter rate is way too high.