The Edge Of Hero's End (DEMO)

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    Hello!
    This Is My Game For The Indie Game Maker 2014 Contest! This Is Also My First Game!

     
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    You Are Just An Average Man Living Your Life On A Peaceful Island.Of Course...That Won't Last For Long. You Hear Talk About A Ship's Arrival And Decide To Go To The Ship. The Pirate Takes You To An Island Where You Have To Be The Hero! You Take Your Sister Gem And You On A New Journey As You Battle Demons And Befriend Gods!

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    John

    [​IMG] A True Warrior. He Is Couragous And Loves Swords. He Doesn't Know He Will Be A Hero Though.
    Gem

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    Noah

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    Epic Battles!

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    Shops!

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    Mild Language

    Mild Use Of Alcohol

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    Save Engine, Core, Battle System, And Options: Yanfly

    Title Screen: NerdiGaming

    Menu Screen: XaiL

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    This Game Will Have A Full Game Download On June 29,2014. The Day Before Games Are Do On The Contest.

    This Is Just A Demo. The Game Is Still Being Worked On And Will Be Finished On June 29,2014. Please Leave Feedback On Some Changes You Think Should Be Made Or Some Suggestions.

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    The Edge Of Hero's End

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    Tis Was A Bump!
     
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    I played the demo of your game until I reached to another island.


    Now, I assume that mapping is heavily work in progress right?


    The game has promise as your writing is actually quite good.
     
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    @Clord,

    The Demo Ends After You Go Inside A Castle That Is On That Island, So Yes It Is Still A Heavy Work In Progress Since The Game I'm Making Is Supposed To Hit The 1 Hour Limit And That Demo Gives You 5-7 Minutes Of It Depending On How Fast Or Slow You Go Through.

    *EDIT*

    I Missed Something. Yes The Mapping Still Needs Work
     
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    *GAME ADD*

    Small Update!

    I Added A New Script For The Menu.

    Credit Under Credit :p
     
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    And then the 3GameMakers said, "Let there be another bump!"
     
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    *GAME UPDATE*

    My first update! I'm working on the castle interior so that we can get closer to the first boss!

    here is a screenshot!

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    Today is a new say for a bump! Going to finish the interior of the castle today!
     
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  9. Indrah

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    Here's my very quick and sketchy take on the game (link for info on why it's so short and all that jazz)




    This is very obviously a very early attempt with a lot, LOT, of very newbies mistakes. Can’t judge it in the same way I can’t be arsed to play it, there is nothing that stands out to me as good. Some things that need work on the whole:


    -GET RID OF CAPITALIZING EVERY WORD. No one will take you seriously doing that.


    -The text.


    -Mapping (oh god the mapping)


    -You have to introduce your characters in some way.


    -Player guidance and plot (there has to be SOME).


    -Encounter rate is way too high.
     
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