The end of the Witch of Lorven

[Indrah]

The end of the Witch of Lorven



After years of struggle, the church has caught the evil Witch of Lorven. This is her fate.

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A 5-10 minutes long (depending on reading speed) game movie depicting the end of the Witch of Lorven. Any other details would be serious spoilers.

While not technically a “completed game” in a traditional sense (it's basically one long scene), to me it’s a finished project. It was my entry for the Let’s Make a Scene contest, but it’s more of a self-contained game than a scene.

Since I was disqualified off the contest for a script error (traitorous bastard! How dare you pop up after I had 5 different people test you!!) I couldn’t really participate, but I’m still rather proud of the finished product, so I’ll be damned if I don’t show it off. Any feedback is appreciated.

Download project (without the RTP) here.

Video Version
I honestly recommend the download, but if you’re too lazy or it gives you an error, here’s the youtube video:

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http://youtu.be/iOYQ3p3D0vg

Holy COW, poeple!

Here's a spoilerish present from Archeia (click to enlarge, it's big)

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Some silly **** too:

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God, DAMN. Seriously? Wow. O.O (And that was some time ago, it's climbed another 200+ views by now OTL)

 

[The Infamous Bon Bon]

This was a really moving scene. I enjoyed it quite a bit. Can't wait to see more of your work.

 

[Mikoto]

That was amazing. I was hesitant to watch it all the way through, but in the end... It was worth watching

 

[Liak]

Absolutely worth watching! The last lines got me choked up a little.

 

[Strawberrycat24]

I actually cried watching it...T_T It was truly beautiful.

 

[Indrah]

@Everyone: Hah, glad you liked it~ It's my most satisfying project so far. It's finished, and it's well done (well, for my standards). It's also the first and only (yet) compelted RM Universe project so far too~ *hogs the Arum Pioneer flag*

 

[jaypee]

I feel sorry about those bug that suddenly appear like pop corn good thing is... that its finished so be happy downloading atm.

 

[NO!]

Well, I very much enjoyed going through this. It was very touching, and very well written. I especially liked the music you chose. I love Roelf Mik's stuff and I'm currently using some of it myself. So, are there going to be any more tie-ins with this? I'm really interested in all the implied history between the characters, and would love to see all that either in a game, or a similar project to this.

 

[Ari]

I know this topic is somewhat old-ish, but I just joined the forums today after DL'ng my trial of VX Ace and as I was poking about for some unique demos to play, etc. I came across this.  Really well written, and the music was lovely.   (And my favorite part, of all, was that tree in the credits - there was something so touching about that to me)

So, from a relative newbie (did poke around the RPG Maker forums/sites years ago), for what it's worth, I really loved this!  Thanks for sharing it.

Ari

 

[senpoRiot]

i really liked the story! Though I can't make manly tears
By the way, I'm currently making a game for Arum and, with your permission, could I make a cameo of the witch of Lorven?

 

[Indrah]

As long as you don't use their characters, you can mention them. I am still building upon the whole thing so I dont want people actually usign the chars before they are involved in my own projects.

Feel free to comment on the events and such, just don't create new details to the story itself that could disrupt the lore.

 

[senpoRiot]

As long as you don't use their characters, you can mention them. I am still building upon the whole thing so I dont want people actually usign the chars before they are involved in my own projects.

Feel free to comment on the events and such, just don't create new details to the story itself that could disrupt the lore.

weeeeeee! thanks!

I was hoping to give her a daughter but change of plans )

 

[Indrah]

Nope, anythign that creates new lore for Dorva is not allowed. She's a big deal in my games and her roles aren't finished.

 

[senpoRiot]

yep I'll remember that. I'll just mention her

 

[potatocat]

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God, DAMN. Seriously? Wow. O.O (And that was some time ago, it's climbed another 200+ views by now OTL)

B-b-but... I'm the potato...