The Final Sanctum

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  1. Caramell

    Caramell Veteran Veteran

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    Hey, I was just wondering if I could get some feedback on a game I've been working on. THIS IS IN RPG MAKER MV (Just in case someone asks)


    I don't necessarily have a synopsis yet or game play features because it is still in VERY EARLY STAGES, Like I have only been working on it for the past week or so, I just want to see if I can get some feedback on what to improve like dialogue for example or certain events that could flow a bit easier. Sorry, um I don't know how to make a download link, so here are the raw files for the game, you can delete them after if you wish. (Sorry I am very new to this).


    Game Title: The Final Sanctum  ( View attachment The Final Sanctum.rpgproject )


    I have Intro cut scene (First image) and a in-game cut scene (Second Image) The "Game" Ends when you reach the forest after an event since there is nothing there at the moment.


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    Kes Global Moderators Global Mod

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    The first thing that I would suggest, based on the screen shots, is that you think about developing your map skills a little more.  An excellent way to do that is to post in the Game and Map Screenshots thread.  You will get very specific feedback there.  You can also learn a huge amount by looking through the thread and see the feedback that others have had, as well as picking up useful ideas from looking at other people's work.
     
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    This really mean a lot thanks!
     
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    Just keep tinkering with your game and pick up on ideas like mentioned above. Mapping, eventing, dialogue writing and such comes with time, so just keep on working. 
     
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    Rei's a cool looking character :)


    Mapping can be super hard, but it just takes practice. Look at some of your fav games' maps and see what it is that you like about them.
     
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