RMMV The Last Chronomancer (OFFICIAL CHAPTER 1 RELEASED)

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@ADMtn
Yes, Jett in particular does go off on his own more than the others.
More splits will happen as the game progresses, but for the majority of the game you are together as one big team. (I wanted that to be the case to maximize the time a player got to plain as the classes/characters they enjoy the most)

Sorry I couldn't put out more content soon enough. I really am trying to get it done ASAP haha.

 

[ADMtn]

Still kind of surprised you don't want to go commercial at all with this project. Though you obviously still can make the jump.

Some serial fiction writers use a model where they release a few episodes for free, then they charge for later episodes (or for the full compilation after the series is finished). Come to think of it, this is similar to the model the creator of the Nina Aquila: Legal Eagle series is using (first chapter is free).

 

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@ADMtn I will probably release the final version commercially. But in the meantime I think it's best to let everyone try it for free.

In the meantime, here is a rework for the Dragoon's Harpoon skill.

 

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A work in progress of the Ice Cave dungeon I've been working on.

 

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Nice work. Played it for a bit and definitely see some of the polish you've done.

My main complaint is how odd it is that Keegan says he wants to go on a journey, travels seemingly to the next screen to Pentam, then stays there for 4 years?? If he's been traveling for some time from the Jade Kingdom, maybe make that more apparent in the dialogue when he first meets Daery. Otherwise it doesn't feel like either one really wants to go on a journey if they give up after 1 minute

 

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Nice work. Played it for a bit and definitely see some of the polish you've done.

My main complaint is how odd it is that Keegan says he wants to go on a journey, travels seemingly to the next screen to Pentam, then stays there for 4 years?? If he's been traveling for some time from the Jade Kingdom, maybe make that more apparent in the dialogue when he first meets Daery. Otherwise it doesn't feel like either one really wants to go on a journey if they give up after 1 minute

Thanks for the comment. I might add something more to that. They are later questioned about that very thing.

For the reason they decided to stay put...

Spoiler

Both Keegan and Daery are looking to leave behind their old lives, but more importantly a part of them seeks to replace that which is gone. Keegan misses having a daughter, and Daery misses having a parent/father that is actually present/with them. So even though they both initially set out to wander/explore once they find eachother they very much find that companionship fills the void.

With all that being said, I'll see if I can come up with some improved dialogue that better explains that early on.

Thanks for the feedback! It is always appreciated!