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Hi, I just want to make this story that I have in mind. It's about a dark fantasy, I hope you like the idea. Maybe it will be developed to something more, who knows
but here is the beginning.

Title: The Remaining Soldier

Introduction

"In the war of Hior, the king sended his soldiers to die for their kingdom. It was a massacre, everyone were killed beside one that was remaining in the pile of his comrades.

His name was Redrick.

Left for dead, no one to speak to, he saw the great eclipse..

For him, the world seem to be at the end of humanity itself.

It was then that he start to scream, and lose his sanity.

After the eclipse ended, Redrick got his sanity back.

And realised something.

Something that will change the world forever.."
 

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not much of a story or where it goes, bt it sounds intresting if
it goes into an adventure to realise it or not :)

let's see how you put it to work :)
 

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says who?

who tells the story, if he was the last one standing?

switch to first person.

Or maybe it's just a narrator?
 

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Or maybe it's just a narrator?
yes, but if the opening scene is the aftermath of a battle, it's better to have the character's own view, not someone else.

it works for Stanley Parable, not so much for Saving Private Ryan.


I just remembered this:

who is the main character here?
how is the narration told?
 
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I've moved this thread to Game Ideas & Prototypes. Thank you.

 

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Why is his name Redrick? Not gonna lie, it's like that scene from Zombie Smashers when they learn that the vampire moon nazi's henchman is called GORDON. :biggrin: :wub :wub Totally O.K. if ya gonna make a comedy game tho! Like, he goes on to make a team with a guy called Bluerick, and they fight a dude called Darkrick...

Anyway, if it's gonna be serious I do like the thing that he's like, the sole survivor, maybe he disillusioned about the king, feels overwhelmin' survivor guilt, goes on to be a pacifist monk, gets summoned to do the One Last Job, all that good stuff! :kaoluv:
 

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