Oh dear, I turn away for a sec and suddenly so much feedback XD
Here's a few edits I made for Kimberly. Hopefully that points you into the right direction. Sorry about the black background, I was too lazy to save your image to my computer :x
That edit is incredible useful and really cool
really cool to see someones else take on my Kimmi ^^ Although Sharm is right on how the shirt part is intended to look, the arms are absolutely stunning!! All in all it gives me a great base to work on, so thank you very much for that! Here, have a cookie for your work
* gives cookie to Celianna*
I don't judge, but I would recommend not to trace Iliketea, because you don't start to think about anatomy or form. I assume Anya is a girl, but her gesture is too maleish due to this. Instead look for a more feminine pose, mostly feminine poses are turned inwards.
Well, actually Anya isnt the most feminine girl, she was raised only by her brother and is rather boyish, a feminine pose would not work for her at all.
I knew Anya's pose reminded me of someone.
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Interesting to see a female version with the same pose.
That makes her warrior-like, as intended, especially with such a big sword to handle on her back.
Jup, that is exactly were the pose is from ^^ When I saw it i thought : "huu... With a little longer hair, and different clothes that would totally be Anyas Pose."
Self confident, boyish, ready for action, saying " Hey, lets go finally, I wanna slay some Dragon and ****!"
To me, Anya comes across as a boy, mainly because it was traced from a boy, but also her face. It has no feminine features. I mean, it's totally ok for her to look like this, but you will have viewers mostly confusing her as a boy.
For Melidas,
here's a good reference picture for holding a staff.
Actually the think I fear most is that people will think that Melidas is a girl ^^'' But just give him 4 years or so and the baby face will grow into a fine Hunk XD
That pose is really great, just what I wanted to to
thx!
Thank you all for your feedback
Its good to see that Anyas "Aura" came out just like I wanted XD
I will rework them tomorrow and show them to you
