It looks quite rough around the edges, but even I don't draw anywhere near that well, so I think you've done a good job. The only thing I'd recommend fixing, if you can, is his left shoulder. Unlike the right one, the edges don't look smooth and where there should be a nice curve, there is a sharp one. '3'
The businessman and the door(?) look really good, but I cannot figure out what the other two characters are >.<
Amazing Nio. How could anyone make any kind of critical assesment about something so good?
I got time fantasy for the christmas sale, and I was trying to complement it with some suitable retro resources, like crazy leen's retro icons. But I soon realized that there were quite a few necessary icons missing from her work, so I tried to make mine:
From left to right, healing, target rate, critical rate, a robe, a shoe and a cape. Anyideas on how to make them suck less?
@Nio >Shiroi will remember that< T.T sorry I don't understand Undertale references. I don't even know why so many people are spamming them around me D: I can make him 300% more manly, but tomorrow and after work, it's starting to get late here.
Is it possible that you don't have a graphic tablet? Because it will be tough then to get good results. Also row 2 expression #2 it that line now between his nose and mouth, I guess it should indicate a part of his upper lip, but it looks like the one half of an mustache, I would suggest to remove that part.. The reflection of the hair, it doesn't reflect the roundness of a human head, since the highlight seems to follow a straight line on his forehead.. Then his clothes these hard kind of highlights they indicate some kind of plastic like clothing or at least they let the material feel like it don't know if this is intentional. And one question, what's the black thingy in front of him? It's difficult to read its shape. His hairstyle shape on his back is better now compared to your old one.
@Corneredcosmos: You did a great job redoing those expressions! I agree with a lot of the feedback above, but overall you've got a nice, stylized feel. C:
@Nio/Shiro Akuma: I don't know if that's the final design or anything, but he looks way too thin in the torso region. His torso should probably extend behind his arm a bit ^^
I'm working on making the MV generator in pixels. >___> I'm about 1/3 of the way done with the female generator, and have the base done for the male generator, but that doesn't take into account that I'll probably fix/remake about 99% of everything when I finish. xD
@Shiroi your feedback is actually accurate. The problem with Nio's drawing is that the head is really big. He needs to decrease the amount of 'back'/'rear' hair harold has in order to fit the current the face he has based on MV's style.
@CorneredCosmos, I'll get back to you after I get some coffee. There's still some issues I want to address but great job so far :3
@amysaurus I didn't want to finish the entire piece my main focus was on the head. Nio is aware of that, I can see that. He might had not finished the area of the armor on the torso region, but you can see the curve which indicates the roundness of Harolds torso, since the 'curve' is going under his arm and indicates the volume of the torso. Maybe Nio is going to make a badass cuirass later there. I just saw the paldrons of Harolds sv battler so I changed them, but I think Nio wasn't already finished with the armor design. And I didn't want to influence his final design, so I stopped there.
@Shiro Thank you for the awesome feedback. And yes that black line definitely looked like a stache I got rid of it.
Hmm I will look up highlights for hair or just wait and see what Acheia has in store for feedback on the subject.
As for the clothes yeah it does seem kinda plasticy I am not too sure what I could replace or fill these areas with.
The black thing is a shirt, he is wearing a coat that buttons up top and reveals the rest as a shirt.
Here's a refrence just so you can see what I am talking about.
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/4sxOLs0.png[/IMG](No I did not make this credit goes to Personigo de la kefo)
@Acheia I look forward towards some more of your feedback
@Amy Thank you Amy! Those are some nice pixel busts you got going.
What the writer wrote: "The curtain is blue."
The readers: "There must be a hidden meaning behind this, perhaps to convey the character emotions ...".
What the writer has in mind: "The curtain is frickin' blue".