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I've been working on some character portraits and this one is just... not right. Specifically the scowl just doesn't seem quite right. I think I need to practice some facial expressions. But for the purpose of my project, maybe this is okay. I think the hair might be overdone, too. I'd rather not totally restart...
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It has antagonist vibes :kaoswt2:
Also I see nothing wrong with this portrait.
 

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The hair looks very dramatic, but also more like she is underwater. Hair adheres to gravity, too :D
And the yellow highlights clash a bit with the brown main color. I would either tone the hightlights down or make the brown color more blond.
But I do like her expression, very fierce.

So, I'm struggling with this sprite.
I thought I would rework the sideview legs, but I don't know if that made the walking smoother or not:

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NEW:

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Thoughts? I looked too long at it and now can't decide.
 

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The hair looks very dramatic, but also more like she is underwater. Hair adheres to gravity, too :D
And the yellow highlights clash a bit with the brown main color. I would either tone the hightlights down or make the brown color more blond.
But I do like her expression, very fierce.

So, I'm struggling with this sprite.
I thought I would rework the sideview legs, but I don't know if that made the walking smoother or not:

OLD:
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NEW:

View attachment 212785

Thoughts? I looked too long at it and now can't decide.
Since it's a female character, the new one looks better. But I have to say the changes are so minors that you almost can't see it. I don't think the player would mind whatever if the old or the new is chosen.

But hey, in my opinion by checking their difference, I would say the new one. :kaohi:
 

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The hair looks very dramatic, but also more like she is underwater. Hair adheres to gravity, too :D
And the yellow highlights clash a bit with the brown main color. I would either tone the hightlights down or make the brown color more blond.
Energy is swirling around her, so the hair is being lifted. Her hair is dark brown with streaks of gold. Though I suppose I should try to make that more clear.

Already I've started redrawing it, haha! I just couldn't take it anymore. The thing is, I already spent a lot of time on that. Though, if it is going to bother me so much, I figured it is best to bite the bullet and redo it.
So, I'm struggling with this sprite.
I thought I would rework the sideview legs, but I don't know if that made the walking smoother or not:

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Thoughts? I looked too long at it and now can't decide.
Have you put it in the engine and walked around with it? Or animated it photoshop or something? I see the gait is slightly more exaggerated. I would certainly assume that made the walking clearer.
 

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Sooo, I drew some more portraits... I love portraits, can you tell? :kaoluv:

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I had some trouble, 'cuz my palette is basically GB Pocket palette (black, white, and two greys). Abby and Cleo on the bottom row have funny lookin' ears, but I don't know yet what to do with them. :kaoswt: Also they supposed to be four sisters, altho I wuz not trying to make any special family resemblance or anythin'. Just a story point, I guess! What do y'all think?
 

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So y'all! I'm makin' my Alice's 8-bit Gothic tileset (EXPECT IT!) and I'm workin' on some trees... Now I'm kinda debating, should I draw them with a black border around the foliage or not? Imma show you what I mean. :kaohi:

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So the topmost image was my initial vision... Like, I wanted foliage without a black border 'round the whole. But then I'm also kinda into my ground colour (teal), and I don't know, does the foliage without the black border blend too much wid the ground? The bottom image is the foliage wid a border, but not sure I like that quite as much? :kaoswt:

GIMME YO OPINIONS! Pleese? :kaoluv:
 

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Ok you guys, thanks for your time and I appreciate y'all, don't ever doubt it! :kaoluv: I think I solved my problem tho!

alice_copsev3.png

I done away with the black border, 'CEPT I added it to the bottom of the foliage, where there wasn't none to start with! Errything 'cept my love life looking so harmonious right now! :kaoluv::kaoswt2:
 

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@alice_gristle your portraits are truly amazing, althought i feel like the trees are kinda lacking, mostly because they don't give me the feel that they are actually trees, mostly because it lacks some brown and there's no trunk to be seen.
Hope i helped at least a little bit but then again it's your choice in how you shape them.
 

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@Johnny_Ray, thanks a bunch, sweetie! And yeah I get whatcho sayin' about the trees, Imma work on them I promise! :kaoswt:

I don't wanna use brown tho, so Imma stick to green and see what I can do... I'll look into separating the trunks a bit more, the feel I was goin' for was a foreboding, impenetrable thicket, seeping with dampness and shrouded in darkness! Buuuut, gonna work on that... :kaocry:
 

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