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The Knights of The Royal Kingdom

SECTION A: SYNOPSIS
There is a great dragon on the outskirts of The Wicked Forest and the king is sending your unit out to vanquish the dastardly dragon. It has interfered with the king's trades for goods for far to long and it is up to you and the others to save the kingdom from perishing due to starvation.

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SECTION B: CHARACTERS

  • The Brave Knight [You]
    A knight companion
    Another knight companion
    Your general

SECTION C: SETTING AND/OR WORLD DEVELOPMENT
A small kingdom built upon an island. The first settlers where the King's ancestors who rose to power all the same. There were many who disagreed with the previous king's way of life and split off onto the other side of the island thus making a rival kingdom. There now sits few kingdoms and many villages upon this island.

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I like this! I'm interested, I like a simple story that's easy to understand and motivations that I can follow. The general style, as evidenced by your screenshots is very nice! I like your font choice especially and the portraits work well with everything else. Great job on that front.

If I may make a suggestion, perhaps consider making the protagonist a bit more distinct? You have three knights, one of which is the player character, but I had a bit of a hard time telling which one he was at first! I understand that there could be a reason behind that, such as to indicate that the knights are a unified group, but in that case maybe change a color, or add a scarf or other feature to sort of give the player a touch more individuality, even if it isn't anything big.
I'm writing a game about knights as well, and even though my protagonist is one knight of many, he is the only one to not wear a helmet- that way he's easy to find in a crowd. Something as simple as that can go a long way in making the character easy to identify.

Best of luck on the continued progress of your game, cheers!
 

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I like this! I'm interested, I like a simple story that's easy to understand and motivations that I can follow. The general style, as evidenced by your screenshots is very nice! I like your font choice especially and the portraits work well with everything else. Great job on that front.

If I may make a suggestion, perhaps consider making the protagonist a bit more distinct? You have three knights, one of which is the player character, but I had a bit of a hard time telling which one he was at first! I understand that there could be a reason behind that, such as to indicate that the knights are a unified group, but in that case maybe change a color, or add a scarf or other feature to sort of give the player a touch more individuality, even if it isn't anything big.
I'm writing a game about knights as well, and even though my protagonist is one knight of many, he is the only one to not wear a helmet- that way he's easy to find in a crowd. Something as simple as that can go a long way in making the character easy to identify.

Best of luck on the continued progress of your game, cheers!
Why thank you! There will be a continuance of games with simple plots. I mean, wouldn't it be fun to have a game with simple objectives and fun gameplay.

Yes, I will probably change his whole character around now that you have stated that. I can see where the confusion would set in.
 

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That's awesome! I've played games long after the storyline has finished simply due to their fun gameplay, so I agree wholeheartedly~

Definitely interested in seeing what you come up with!
 

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It'll be finished within the next few months, and then it's on to the next simple fun game.
 

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