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"There are many people around me, but why do I feel lonely?"
Game Progress: 10%

Screenshots:
Title
Webp.net-gifmaker.gif
Classroom
1.png
Chemistry Lab
Science Lab.png
Clinic
Clinic.png

Characters:
1 (2).pngHaruto
An introverted person and the game's focus.

81.png Aiko
Haruto's sister. Very affectionate and protective towards Haruto.

21.pngReo
Protagonist's smart best friend.

31.png Kaito
Protagonist's mischievous best friend.

41.pngRiku
The "cool kid". Always spend times alone.

51.pngTouma
A complicated guy. Sometimes acts friendly, but sometimes just an enemy.

61.pngYui
An out-going and kind girl.

71.pngHana
Yui's best friend. Shy at everyone but Yui.

Story:
True friends are always there for you,
Fake friends are there too, but can you trust them?

One night, a happy bloody night, Haruto and his friends were staying in the school.
But then, without realizing, the security locked up the school door.
So, Haruto and his friends had to spend the night at the school.

Suddenly, sounds are heard everywhere.
Suspicions and worries were building up in everyone's hearts and minds.

They realized it was a bad idea from the start.
Tears, Sweat and Blood were shed.

Can they survive this all?

"Note: There are more than this in the game, not to mention the plot twists."

Gameplay:
You will be able to play as everyone (excluding the NPCs) in the game in different scenes.
This is to challenge the player on how many characters will survive till the end.

Credits:
Scripts:
Acezon
Victor Sant
Yanfly
Neon Black

Character design:
Lunaii
Alpha Generator
Zuri (me)

Tilesets:
painhurt
ayene_chan
google source
Zuri (me)

Sounds/Music:
SoundBible.com
(Unknown Source)
cluvzc (Zedge.net)

Font:
You Murderer

Please support me, the game developer (Zuri) on this game!:kaojoy:
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[VERY SHORT DEMO] (click to download)​
 
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Hi!

This game looks pretty good! I'll be waiting for a demo :kaojoy:
 

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I've uploaded the demo, it's very short though since I cut many parts to prevent spoiling the whole story.
Great! I'll check it out when I have time :kaojoy:
 

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I gave your demo a try, and boy you weren't kidding about it being short. :kaoswt2: It was so short that I really couldn't get a feel for the game at all... A demo should show the player why they should play the full game (or in the case of this forum, to get feedback on game mechanics), and your demo doesn't really do that. If you release another demo or update this one, it'd be a good idea to include at least one mechanic that will be in the game, like if you're gonna have the player have to find an item to solve a puzzle later in the game, have the player need to get something from Haruto's locker and use it somewhere in the demo.

There were a few graphical things I want to mention. Personally I don't think the really tall sprites match the chubby young-looking faces (and the tall sprites also look a bit odd in comparison to the size of some of the tiles). If you don't want to use the chibi Ace sprites, then I'd suggest using the XP sprites, or ones around that size. There was also a passability error with the fire extinguisher, walking on it allows the player to walk up onto the nearby walls.
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There's not much else I can mention, since the demo was so short. Maybe the story will end up being really interesting, but unfortunately the demo didn't get to show any of it.
 

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