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I kind of worry about the main antagonist in my story because it's just caused by a confused otherworldly entity which entered the world by a rift, and has no way of getting out or being understood.
But because the world has no way of comprehending this stranger with its own logic, the otherworldly being's presence in itself bewilders the wildlife and mutates its surroundings. As a cause of concern, the characters in my story set off to rectify the problem. It's a pretty light hearted story that's supposed to focus more on the cast of characters and their problems, maybe with a few alien quirks. I only worry about the lack of a conflict that might cause everything to become pretty underwhelming. I was thinking of implying that there's an organisation of people who were behind this series of events, a doomsday cult maybe. That sounds anything but light hearted though...
But because the world has no way of comprehending this stranger with its own logic, the otherworldly being's presence in itself bewilders the wildlife and mutates its surroundings. As a cause of concern, the characters in my story set off to rectify the problem. It's a pretty light hearted story that's supposed to focus more on the cast of characters and their problems, maybe with a few alien quirks. I only worry about the lack of a conflict that might cause everything to become pretty underwhelming. I was thinking of implying that there's an organisation of people who were behind this series of events, a doomsday cult maybe. That sounds anything but light hearted though...


