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I still really want to play this just because of the story/scenery but I won't do so till you fix those mapping/gameplay issues :/

Making use of the feedback you received so far, could you please :3?
 

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That was already fixed on 1.1 version.
 

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This game looks intriguing for certain, but I'm struggling to tell if I want to play it because the preview kind of leaves me a bit confused as to what the story is (other than him being stranded in space lol) 
 

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This game looks intriguing for certain, but I'm struggling to tell if I want to play it because the preview kind of leaves me a bit confused as to what the story is (other than him being stranded in space lol) 
Try it for just 10 minutes, that will give you an idea about the game.
 

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Tried it yet?
I tried downloading, and the website brought up a virus and was trying to take over my computer (it was malware and wouldn't let me exit the webpage) so I had to turn off my surface and restart it...I'm not trying to get a virus, so I would suggest uploading with MediaFire only.
 

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I'm sorry to say that you lost a player and a review, because the lights are killing my eyes, and I can't see the circuit puzzle you must pass to enter D35's room. I'm unable to finish it.

Please patch it, and fix the grammar issues. Such glaring errors will impact whether or not people ignore your games, or not. Feedback is very valuable, so you should take special care to fix every significant problem that people address you with. This will make your players love you, and beg you for more.

Thanks. It looks promising, but it hurts my eyes too much. (No, I'm not old. Just have sensitive eyes, I guess.)
 

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hey I really wanted to try this game, but I've been unsuccessful in getting the download file.  I tried both links, and I can't seem to figure out how to get the file (and not some adware program) to download.  probably my own fault / newbishness, but just wanted to let you know. 
 

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I have just finished the game and I loved the twist ending :p  . Although at the start, I didn’t know how to leave the room cause its too dark and the tiles confused me. After I finally knew where to go, everything went out smoothly, apart from the tiles, walls and loopy cutscenes. Oh, and there was this problem where I couldn’t see the sprite, I think it was when D.D. had to go to the clinic because of his brain but it was fixed when that guy from the other ship went to the China girls room. The B.G.M. made the atmosphere cold, lonely and kinda creepy. The robotic voices creeped me out too ;)  . I wasn't bothered by the pipe mini game cause it was fun trying to make it in time. Story wise, it was detailed and very good although, it does raise a lot more questions(making me want moar :p  ). However.. just to rant and vent a little, since I don't have someone to share it to, in my opinion, AIREI is irrational and a brat, cause she doesn’t know that humanity is like an ice cream cause it has many flavours and does whatever she wants :stare:  . Plus, can you explain what is the moral of the story cause I still don’t get it :unsure:  . Sorry if I come across as rude and/or mean, if I did, don’t take it to heart, cause really, overall, it’s a  nice game, yo :D   
 

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hey, I'm stuck.  traveling in space to the star system with baguo...and the screen has just been the spaceship traveling for about 15 minutes.  can't do anything.  can't even get back to the previous screen.  what am I supposed to do?

-edit- wow..ok..you really screwed up your events.  after getting the lvl3 key card and viewing the empty space event...if the player goes to the left screen he views the event where 'damon' is sick, and then I go up north and when you do the part to travel to baguo...you are infinitely stuck in space, because the dialogue event never triggers. 
 
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I have just finished the game and I loved the twist ending :p  . Although at the start, I didn’t know how to leave the room cause its too dark and the tiles confused me. After I finally knew where to go, everything went out smoothly, apart from the tiles, walls and loopy cutscenes. Oh, and there was this problem where I couldn’t see the sprite, I think it was when D.D. had to go to the clinic because of his brain but it was fixed when that guy from the other ship went to the China girls room. The B.G.M. made the atmosphere cold, lonely and kinda creepy. The robotic voices creeped me out too ;)  . I wasn't bothered by the pipe mini game cause it was fun trying to make it in time. Story wise, it was detailed and very good although, it does raise a lot more questions(making me want moar :p  ). However.. just to rant and vent a little, since I don't have someone to share it to, in my opinion, AIREI is irrational and a brat, cause she doesn’t know that humanity is like an ice cream cause it has many flavours and does whatever she wants :stare:  . Plus, can you explain what is the moral of the story cause I still don’t get it :unsure:  . Sorry if I come across as rude and/or mean, if I did, don’t take it to heart, cause really, overall, it’s a  nice game, yo :D   
Thanks for the feedback. I guess the moral of the story is the complications of space travel and how fragile we humans are when it comes to solitude (specially space). Sorry for the bugs and all, since its my first game there are some minor errors in the eventing.
 

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hey, I'm stuck.  traveling in space to the star system with baguo...and the screen has just been the spaceship traveling for about 15 minutes.  can't do anything.  can't even get back to the previous screen.  what am I supposed to do?

-edit- wow..ok..you really screwed up your events.  after getting the lvl3 key card and viewing the empty space event...if the player goes to the left screen he views the event where 'damon' is sick, and then I go up north and when you do the part to travel to baguo...you are infinitely stuck in space, because the dialogue event never triggers. 
Let me check and get back to you. ty for feedback.
 

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I'm sorry to say that you lost a player and a review, because the lights are killing my eyes, and I can't see the circuit puzzle you must pass to enter D35's room. I'm unable to finish it.

Please patch it, and fix the grammar issues. Such glaring errors will impact whether or not people ignore your games, or not. Feedback is very valuable, so you should take special care to fix every significant problem that people address you with. This will make your players love you, and beg you for more.

Thanks. It looks promising, but it hurts my eyes too much. (No, I'm not old. Just have sensitive eyes, I guess.)
Sorry about that. Will fix soon. ty for feedback.
 

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You're welcome, and thank you! Happy gaming.
 

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hey I really wanted to try this game, but I've been unsuccessful in getting the download file.  I tried both links, and I can't seem to figure out how to get the file (and not some adware program) to download.  probably my own fault / newbishness, but just wanted to let you know. 
Weird, first time I heard about this.
 

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Hello was going to finish game before i leave a review hate to say... 3.5/5 Needs Work

Sorry to say your in beta mode still, beginning of the game is rock solid but many many event errors which ruins story based games I will still play and complete it but i got stuck 3 times cause of glitches, sorry i need to move on for now  :( shouldn't take you long to go threw the game and patch up these bugs

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great story though i dig to whole lost in space and the videos and cutscenes are pretty cool hope to see newer version
 
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It's pretty interesting, a bit rough around the edges but still pretty good.
 

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Hello was going to finish game before i leave a review hate to say... 3.5/5 Needs Work

Sorry to say your in beta mode still, beginning of the game is rock solid but many many event errors which ruins story based games I will still play and complete it but i got stuck 3 times cause of glitches, sorry i need to move on for now  :( shouldn't take you long to go threw the game and patch up these bugs

example of one




great story though i dig to whole lost in space and the videos and cutscenes are pretty cool hope to see newer version
Thanks for the feedback.
 

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