RMVXA World Fragment

[jenova3new]

This is a story, a story about a dying world. A world that lost everything it has.


Do you know?


Sometimes, the seed of knowledge is poisonous


We become arrogant and destroy our own world


We bite off more than we can chew


We act as though we always know everything


We behave as if the world is ours


In the end, the calamity befell us all


And we became the most detested of races


Yes. We are...


Human


But, there was one of us


Who, using Her own body as a catalyst


Brought into being that which would become our last hope


An "Ark"


Born using the lifeforce of countless of the wisest race, the elves


Adult, Child, Man, Woman; All gave their lives willingly to save us


But there was a cost to that gift


And the race known as Elf was extinguished from the world


The Ark, when summoned, pierced the sky and the ground


And with Her own hand, she sowed the seed of life inside the Ark


That seed grew, awaiting the rebirth of their home


But time ever marches forward


With each generation our knowledge of the past began to fade


And in the end, we lost our history, and lost ourselves.


We are life in this little fragment of the world

: Character :




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Light Edgewing


Voiced By : Johan Titarsole


A mysterious man who falling from the sky , he looks like a human... but is he really a human ? No human can survive from that.... right ?

Viona Vermilion



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Aleshia Siegfried

Lilac Empire Crown Princess.

Mia



A mysterious girl that always following Light wherever he's go
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Iris Ainsworth

?????????????

Aife Reaghan

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:FEATURES:
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Unique Active time Battle System


Character mascot from other series of RPG maker Series Adapted to game, such as Eric,Ralph,Aldo,Eisele and more.


?Marriage/Dating Sim?


Wave Battle System


Semi Real Time State


Alchemy

SCREENSHOOT











FLAW




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-I having a Hard Time to maintain the difficulty Spike for major boss mob


-Defense Stance timming for Guarding an OHKO attack from boss still have quite random element


-Time Limitation and Buff/Debuff Duration still not balanced, because thet will keep decreasing, even on sequence, because they using a "per frame" duration


-unsure to keep the grind element to "reasonable" level on most player

 

[jenova3new]

Yet To be implemented Feature


-Limited Save ( You Must Craft some item needed for saving your data )


-Permanent Heroine Death


-Reduced Difficulty Mode


-Awakening / Limit Break


-Chain Combo


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-Limited Save ( You Must Craft some item needed for saving your data )


Some Item will be required  if you want to save your data, as part of the story, The Protagonist can set an anchor in the river of time, and turn back unconciously if he, or someone dear to him were die, with a mysterious help by someone from another world


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please tell us from your viewpoint, if you think, if any of this feature will reducing your gaming enjoyment, feel free to give us your opinion

 

[ThePotatoOfFire]

This looks really good! However, you might want to have a few people do a proofreading demo. I'm excited to see what this game has in store! The battle system looks really interesting.


Edit: I like the idea of the limited save, as well as the little story with it. You can do a lot with that. However, you may want to make that item easily obtainable for the player.


Permanent death certainly sounds daunting, especially if it's a main storyline character. It's an interesting route to take, and it can be done very well, just be careful about how you can play it into the story. You'll also want to make sure that battles won't become too hard with the death of a character.


Good luck!

 

[Abdulla Al-Farsi]

It looks so AWESOME!!!


I can't wait to play this!!


The Maps are so amazing!! 


Keep it up...

 

[jenova3new]

Eric


Apostle that act as a guardian, a Heroic Spirit that gain a flesh and body to protect the world ballance in the absence of creator. He have a finite life span, but always reborn everytime he complete his life span, and regain his past memories when he reach an adult growth stage. currently married, with one daughther.


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Land of Fiera


An Ancient Land that Artificialy copied from another world, Burning Hot land with Flair Mountain as a core, also known as Krakatau mountain in the past, some mysterious force keep the mountain from erupted for 500 years, a land with only one town as liveable area, with a harsh climate, all of it's resident already used to it, and trying to use it to make a high quality weapon, armor, or any smith related work.

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[jenova3new]

Current battle system set to half speed


some skill is not complete yet










core gameplay system making any boss mob, always unbeatable without Ultimate move


some boss also have a shield gauge, to temporary reduce their def to 0


without any shield break, any ultimate move is as crapy as normal skill

 

[The_Trinity]

That mapping you have is absolutely gorgeous!

 

[Freank]

very nice project ! Good idea and realization !

 

[jenova3new]

Dev Log


- New Party Member (Airis) added


- Change The Maximum Battle party from 4 to 5


- Decrease the game speed by 30%


- Revamp HUD to become more compact

 

[jenova3new]

The Game World Map, well, we will do our best

 

[Crabs]

Holy sh...!


Your game looks so amazing!


Are you planning on commercializing your game? Because it looks so professional.

 

[Timespiraled_RPG]

Woah, that's some serious maps there! Looks great!

 

[jenova3new]

Holy sh...!


Your game looks so amazing!


Are you planning on commercializing your game? Because it looks so professional.

Yes, this game is planned to be a commercial, as you can see, the game still on early development


there is still many flaw that need to be fixed, especially the grammar (since english isn't my native), and some part of battle system, and the story progression, as well as character development.

 

[Bitschi]

Wow, the map looks gorgeous! Especially that nighttime one in your battle demo video   ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ  Your battle system looks really cool too

 

[SlySlySly]

I always hate when a good game is made with VXace... I wish i had like one PC to play those on

 

[Nenê]

STORY DESCRIPTION


I'll be honest, I read the description of the story, but really couldn't understand what it's actually about. That's not to say that the description is supposed to spoil the whole thing for me, but I just could not get excited for this game based off what was explained. Everything was very...vague.


All I understood was:

1. The story is about a dying world.
   
2. Said world, though dying, has a strong will to live.
   
3. Said world copied parts of another world and made it it's own.
   
4. Said world runs the risk of being rejected by the copies it's trying to make?
   
5. The world being copied is called Fragmentia.
   
6. The inhabitants of the copy world are trying to change their world's fate even though they have no memories of who they are.
   

So, from my perspective, I have to ask myself: what's this game about? Why is this world dying? What's its reason for copying various parts of another world? Why do the inhabitants of the copy world want to change their world's fate if they don't even know who or what they are? What's triggering their motives?


Verdict: I just don't know or understand enough about the story to get excited for it, therefore making it more likely for me to pass on the game entirely.


CHARACTERS

• Ventus Edgewing: He carries the "blood of the creators" (the Edgewing family line) in him, and is therefore related to those responsible for creating the Tower of Fragmentia, without him knowing it? Yet, he's touted as the strongest (and probably also the smartest) being on Fragmentia? I just don't see how a character of his stature would miss something like that. Maybe it's all the women.
   
  
• Viona Vermilion: I wasn't able to understand her description/background other than the fact that Ventus' mana always sexually arouses her and that she's been genetically modified to always be attracted to him. If that's true, then I have no idea why she's essential to him or the story.
   
  
• Alisa Angelus: A princess who was once engaged to Ventus because they were in love, but then broke up with him (thus breaking his heart), which forced him to leave the empire. She then feels horrible about it all and goes looking for him. This is a much better descripion than the others, but still doesn't give me enough insight into the character other than believing that she just can't make up her mind about Ventus.
   
  
• Mia Vignette: Another woman made for Ventus, it seems. This time, they're soulmates. Apparently, Ventus is a Deity from a different world who was summoned by Mia to solve a problem - which he did, and then left. But, before leaving he made her an artificial eye because she lost her original. As a result, she fell in love and wants to become the perfect housewife. Don't worry, that frying pan willcome in handy during battle though - just ask Rapunzel.
   
  
• Iris Ainsworth: She's a mystery. But, I'd probably wager she's another love interest based on the pattern of female characters in this game.
  

Verdict: I don't find any of the characters impressive or interesting at first glance. Ventus has all the hallmarks of an over-powered hero who gets all the women, but has nothing more that defines him. All of the female characters seem hell bent on making Ventus theirs and are either genetically modified to like him or will do anything to have him. That's fine and all, but that means all of the female characters are essentially the same because of that one goal - him.


FEATURES

• A unique, active time battle system, which I've seen and thought looked really cool and fun.
  
• Cameos from other characters in the RPG Maker series. That's neat. I've always been a fan of cameos if they made sense in the story.
  
• A marriage/dating feature. That would make sense given the characters I've seen so far. And, to be honest, that's what it feels like - a dating sim set in a fantasy world.
  
• A high difficulty. Not even sure why that's a feature.
  
• A Wave Battle System. Unless it's just me being new at RPG Maker games or systems, I don't  even know what a Wave Battle System is. Even if I did, why does there need to be another battle system?
  
• Real-Time Turn Based Battle. Again, why the need for another battle system?
  
• Alchemy. More eyeballs for Mia, I'm sure.
  
• Multiple Endings. Fall in love with a different girl every playthrough, right?
  

SCREENSHOTS


To put it simply, this game looks gorgeous. From the HUD, to the character designs, to the maps - I'm very impressed.


OVERALL


I feel like your game needs a better explanation of what it's about. "A story about a dying world" or "a story about a world made up of different parts of another world" doesn't tell me much, if anything at all. I think the characters sound pretty generic because there was nothing to make me think they were unique or different from one another in any significant or meaningful way. The main character is the smartest, strongest being in the world who's pursued by countless women all seemingly willing to do anything for him. Ok, so what? Is the story still about a dying world? A character and the beautiful women that long for him? Or is it about all the living inhabitants wanting to change the world's fate and discover who they are? I simply don't know.

 

[jenova3new]

@Nenê Sorry, i made the description to be very vague because there's a heavy spoiler in some part of the story


the description is made from the world civilian POV, that only able to tell the glimpse of history, after all, the history is erased after the destruction of the old world (surface) and they don't have any way to know the past. basicaly, everyone is beliving on what they want to belive.


The Protagonist is't overpowered in the battle, the enemy power is adjusted to make a "strugle" in the battle


Overpowered term is a POV from Ordinary human explanation, and it's not a 100% accurate


you can't call him smartest because he's have many thing lacking, and that's hinder his growth and everyone around them


From developer PoV, he is just a mortal, but on another level from ordinary human


while his power may basicaly unlimited, but is not omnipotent and neither omniscient there's some price he must pay everytime he use his power


while he has an unlimited power, there is a limit of what his mortal body can utilize, he can't pass his mortal limit, like any other.


The heroine isn't simply a lover, they are lacking something that to be caled a lover, this is also description from 3rd normal person point of view


dating sim system is basicaly just an extra system, that enable combination attack.


Multiple ending isn't based on heroine route, it's based from how is the world become


Extra battle system is made to increase performance, there is an engine limitation on VX Ace, extra battle system added to make battle pace slower, and prevent the fps to dropped drasticaly during battle


i trying to make the description of the game and character looks very generic, because there is no way to know someone just from glimpse of sight


well, the project still on early stage, i will change the character description based from how the others react. even they will spoiling some part of the story

 

[Nenê]

jenova3new,


I just wonder if the description could have been worded better or differently in order to make better sense without going too deep into spoiler territory or remaining too vague. But, that's just my opinion.


The Protagonist simply sounded overpowered, not in the actual battle sense, but in the story sense, only because you described him as the strongest being in Fragmentia.


Also, you called him smartest.   Unless you actually meant to say that he's simply smart and strong, and not actually the smartest in the world. In which case, I like the sound of that idea better.


I thought Alisa loved/loves Ventus (hence why they were once engaged) and Mia believes they're meant to be together? I'd consider that "love" from their POV, but that's just based off the description you gave me. Maybe it's just worded weird and I'm perceiving it all wrong.


I was being sarcastic about the multiple ending bit. I'm sure, or at least hope, there would be more to the endings than that. I'm glad to hear there is.


Ah, I did not know that about the battle system. Interesting. I would never have guessed.

 

[jenova3new]

@Nenê


Maybe you can help me with description if you want


you can pm me, just be sure, the story will be spoiled entirely to you


Wave Battle System is a feature that battle will simply go on with more than one set of troops, usualy is used on boss battle, you will face the swarm of lackey first before the boss is apeared.


Real time is a term used for state duration, some Full guard stance is only have instant duration, and used to guard against heavy attack


there is a boss attack that can give you 20.000 damage, but with some considerable cast time, from the cast time, you can guess what is the attack that boss will use


and while Full Guard Stance only last 2 second in real time, they will reduce any damage you taken by 90%, so you must use Full Guard right before the boss finished casting in order to survive


There is also a boss attack that will wait for 2 second before giving you damage, so, you must take casting time as a clue to guess the attack type


so, without walkthrough, it's basicaly almost imposible to win the boss battle in first fight

 

[Canini]

I think the concept sounds interesting but a big vague. The graphical style is very professionally done (I particularly like the floating battle scenes). It is good that you are aware of the game´s current flaws, it also gives your future playtesters something to give extra attention to. I think the characters could use a bit more fleshing out, they seem a bit flat as it is. I am sure they are more interesting in the actual game, but it doesn´t really come though here. In any case, I would love to playtest this when you get a playable demo done for the public.