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Disclaimer: Fantasy religion and a lil' bit of implied sex
Zieg
Zieg
SECTION A: SYNOPSIS
Hello guys! This is just a small passion project. It's an interactive visual novel (for now) it should last around 30 minutes. It has some existential elements but it's mainly a love story (for now). This build ends when it takes you to the menu screen.
This story is about Zieg, a normal boy who decided to dream big in a restrictive country dominated by a religious organization that decides almost every aspect of an individual's life. Said organization
flips his life upside down and threatens to make him miserable until the day he doesn't draw breath. It's a story about oppression, existential ennui and depression (at first). You follow him in his old new life as he goes from task to task and hates every second of it (at first).
This is chapter 1, the focal point of the story is purposefully narrow and isolated to a few characters. I only have less than 5 minutes worth of video tutorials in my brain, I just wanted to get started right away and get something done before my motivation left me stranded like it often does. So I wanted to start small. This much took me a week to make, probably because of my inexperience. Lots of trial and error.
I'm planning chapter 2 to play differently and have a different vibe and to expand on the world everything happens in. Add new characters and whatnot. I'll also actually try to learn the software better before making it.
I've tested it a lot so there shouldn't be any ways to soft lock yourself but if somehow you manage to please tell me!
I'm not really a writer and I'm not confident in my punctuation so if you spot any mistakes please let me know!
It's the first thing I've ever created so please feel free to praise it or stomp all over it. I don't mind critics!
This story is about Zieg, a normal boy who decided to dream big in a restrictive country dominated by a religious organization that decides almost every aspect of an individual's life. Said organization
flips his life upside down and threatens to make him miserable until the day he doesn't draw breath. It's a story about oppression, existential ennui and depression (at first). You follow him in his old new life as he goes from task to task and hates every second of it (at first).
This is chapter 1, the focal point of the story is purposefully narrow and isolated to a few characters. I only have less than 5 minutes worth of video tutorials in my brain, I just wanted to get started right away and get something done before my motivation left me stranded like it often does. So I wanted to start small. This much took me a week to make, probably because of my inexperience. Lots of trial and error.
I'm planning chapter 2 to play differently and have a different vibe and to expand on the world everything happens in. Add new characters and whatnot. I'll also actually try to learn the software better before making it.
I've tested it a lot so there shouldn't be any ways to soft lock yourself but if somehow you manage to please tell me!
I'm not really a writer and I'm not confident in my punctuation so if you spot any mistakes please let me know!
It's the first thing I've ever created so please feel free to praise it or stomp all over it. I don't mind critics!
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